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How to Write an Effective Title for Your Grant Proposal

Your grant proposal's title creates the first impression. If it's a good one, you'll
have a distinct advantage over your competition. Here are five good titles along with notes on what makes each one effective.

1. "Countdown to Survival"
Key Point: Establish a clear sense of urgency.
One of the primary reasons proposals are declined is that they do not come across as urgent enough. The funding agency pays closer attention to grant proposals that establish the importance of immediate attention. In this successful proposal (for a defibrillator program), the writer also uses the word "Survival" to underscore the life-and-death consequences of the program. Smart.

2. "When the Well is Dry, We Know the Worth of Water"       
                                                                 --Benjamin Franklin
Key Point: Figures of authority add credibility to your proposal.
Here's a title that brings instant clarity to a proposal for a new pumper. The writer also adds credibility to her grant request by reminding us of these wise words from a founding father.

3. "The Hidden Epidemic"
Key Point: Tease the mind with a mystery.

We all love mysteries. Creatively placed, they draw the reader into the "story" of your proposal. "The Hidden Epidemic" to which this writer refers is the growth of juvenile firesetting across the country.

4. "My Job is Killing Me, and it May be Killing You"
Key Point: Speak directly to the reader.

The strength in this title comes from its directness. It's smart (and more effective) if your writing communicates directly with a single reader. This title from a health and wellness grant proposal also teases the reader into exploring the proposal further (as in title #4).

5. "Saving Our Past From Fire"
Key Point: It's an advantage if your title reflects the funding agency's mission.

This proposal for a thermal imaging camera was funded by the city's historical society. The writer helped grab the society's attention by incorporating the word "Past" in the title.

 

Good luck,

Richard Lambert
President, The Idea Bank
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